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  teejaylongsword

  9 years ago

  Good photos that clearly show your faces. Good to see clear shot of Mr. Also good to see the photo of you together that shows you care about each other as a couple. Perhaps you could have some tasteful body shots (Swimwear would fit with your other tasteful pictures). Only other suggestion would be to move the second paragraph (the one that mentions full time work and family etc) further down because it is not a great 'hook'. It is truthful and still good for the reader to see, but it is also something that may make play meets not always easy. Maybe you could let the reader build interest before they read this. Overall I think it is a good profile. best of luck

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  rupamohan

  9 years ago

  If you share how well your profile is working it can help to give more targeted feedback. Are you getting adequate response from wanted?Are you getting manageable response from unwanted?

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  RHP User

  9 years ago

  You're very clear with what you want and your written part is friendly and genuine, all great. Few things that wouldn't appeal to me, but to be clear, I'm not saying wouldn't appeal to others. Mr playing with you, watching, you both have to play together, due respect, but IMO it reeks of insecurity and that would be a no from me, but then you're not looking for me so it's all conversation isn't it 😀 One of the reasons, the main reason, I don't play with couples is because of this. But that's just me. please don't take offence, just being honest with my thoughts 😃

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  RHP User

  9 years ago

  Also body pictures. You have your faces on display, why not full body pictures, individually and together?

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  RHP User

  9 years ago

  Single straight men won't care as a general statement, but bi women might want time with Mr?

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  RHP User

  9 years ago

  Love the profile and you (Mrs) have a friendly and inviting smile. Having your partner clearly in the profile, thumbs up. Clear expectations are established and wording is positive :) Good luck guys Mary xx

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  RHP User

  9 years ago

  Very very good profile and has everything anyone could want to know about the two of you... Very sexy pics of Mrs and Mr is a handsome bloke too... (in a manly way not that I'm attracted to him hahaha). I'd so like to meet up with a couple like you when I'm next in Brissy for sure. Thx Jeff - Posted from rhpmobile

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  AnnieWhichway

  9 years ago

  And clearly attracting some sexy players if your friends list is any indication

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  RHP User

  9 years ago

  Some great suggestions that we shall take on board :) E (Mrs)

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